I just wrote a short complete story about based around one of Shakespeare's plays- a quote really. And I want you all to read it and give me some feedback. I haven't even read it all the way through till the end- my mind tends to just GO while i type, and the music i listened to while creating it didn't let me take a break until it was done. I know it needs a LOT of refining details, but the point im making is- what do you think of it as a whole??? I take criticism very well- but like i said thats not the point to this test. Just the ideas would be good- thanks!
(OH!! VEERYYY IMPORTANT!! I want you all to open up a new tab in your browser and go to
[link] and listen to both of these songs on REPEAT for the entire time you read this- you'll understand my fast paced passion while writing this .. if you can- your missing out ong good dirt feeling here!
Song1.
[link] Song2.
[link] Song3
[link]ACTUAL STORY LINK-
[link]THANK YOU ALL SO MUCH!! let me know what you think
i appreciate your time being taken
ATTENTION all of my deviant fans
Dazed
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me =
donc si je mâche un chewing-gum, (...)
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If you've always did what you've always done
you'll always get what you've always gotten. ♥
my other work:
[link]
Just to say that i moved from this gallery, now i'm here [link] if you're interested (as you were watching)
cheers
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me =
donc si je mâche un chewing-gum, (...)
have nice one, and see you later
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~*~ Just slightly insane... just slightly ~*~
where ya been?
miss you! put up some new drawing won't you?? ♥♥♥♥
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.-. i'm upside down i guess.
♥♥Don't let the world get you down,
things go in circles♥♥
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I can't think of something appropriate to put here. Have a link instead: ~kimichan-stock
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"bad art is more tragically beautiful than good art 'cause it documents human failure."- Tristan Rêveur
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