I just wrote a short complete story about based around one of Shakespeare's plays- a quote really. And I want you all to read it and give me some feedback. I haven't even read it all the way through till the end- my mind tends to just GO while i type, and the music i listened to while creating it didn't let me take a break until it was done. I know it needs a LOT of refining details, but the point im making is- what do you think of it as a whole??? I take criticism very well- but like i said thats not the point to this test. Just the ideas would be good- thanks!

(OH!! VEERYYY IMPORTANT!! I want you all to open up a new tab in your browser and go to [link] and listen to both of these songs on REPEAT for the entire time you read this- you'll understand my fast paced passion while writing this .. if you can- your missing out ong good dirt feeling here!

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THANK YOU ALL SO MUCH!! let me know what you think
i appreciate your time being taken